I’ve plugged in two new reflection/transition chapters for Free Souls, here and here. I’m still doubtful that what I’ve written the past few weeks, as written, can or should stand in the final, completed book. But I’m still just as much in the dark as ever on how it can be properly incorporated. Maybe once I can get the whole novel redrafted and read it through as a whole, the solution will become clearer to me.
And then, won’t the Outtakes page grow!