Substituted new or revised writing for Chapters 11 and 12 of Free Souls, that is. And supplied a little transitional change to lead in from Chapter 10. Go read them, if you will, and if you liked either of them before, I hope you’ll like them even better now.
Meanwhile, I’ve cut and pasted the original material to a new page I’m calling “Out Takes.” I have no idea how to get to it on this blog, but it’s there.
(Edit: Never mind. I see it’s up there under the banner photo, in the black bar to the left.)